Today we got into groups and discussed our 4 developed concepts
The people in my group really liked my window concept and my shitty thoughts concept
Summary of feedback
-Facebook window
- it looks like it may be an advertisement for Facebook
- looks like a puzzle piece
- swap the window ares to be the space around the f, rather than the f itself
- put the text in between the connections
- too much white space
- like the window concept
- it's welcoming
- feels connective and social
- look at artist renee margritte for window
-Shitty thoughts
- needs to be more shocking
- put something inside the droplets
- just one bird
- the drops could be thought bubbles or bombs
- "don't crap on someone's day"
- size, scale, keep shape
-Social Experimentation
- mouse wheel, cheese
- mouse maze
- compare to a computer mouse
-Plenty of fish in the sea
- Change slogan to 'socialise offline'
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